1. Posted: November 8, 2019In:

    A lone wolf con artist seduces a woman by pretending to be someone else, but must first spend Christmas with her family, whom he grows to love.

    Michael Fine Logliner

    I think this is the strongest logline of all your variations. It focuses more on the dilemma of the protag (i.e.: will he continue conning once he loves this family?) more than the?nature of the con (i.e.: He has an?attachment-free lifestyle, and she is?wholesome), and I like that angle more than thRead more

    I think this is the strongest logline of all your variations. It focuses more on the dilemma of the protag (i.e.: will he continue conning once he loves this family?) more than the?nature of the con (i.e.: He has an?attachment-free lifestyle, and she is?wholesome), and I like that angle more than the clash of individual personalities between the protag and his “love.” I think it’s a better story.

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  2. Posted: November 8, 2019In:

    A group of rich, snobby college students take their wheelchair-bound female friend to a cabin for the weekend where they are attacked by a pack of female zombies. The students can?t figure out why until the girl discovers that these students murdered them? and they are seeking revenge!

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    Michael Fine Logliner

    Thanks for your review and great advice on rearranging the logline! The idea is that the wheelchair bound girl ends up being the protagonist, but at first we think all the guys (and especially the main rich kid, her "boyfriend") is the protagonist who is the key character fighting the zombies. As thRead more

    Thanks for your review and great advice on rearranging the logline!

    The idea is that the wheelchair bound girl ends up being the protagonist, but at first we think all the guys (and especially the main rich kid, her “boyfriend”) is the protagonist who is the key character fighting the zombies. As the girl discovers her boyfriend and his friends killed the female zombies when they were alive, she turns on her friends and becomes the protagonist and the MALE students become the ANTAGONISTS.! The catch here is that the ZOMBIES THEMSELVES become the good guys who are killing scummy people.

    My idea is that the movie is a metaphor for MeToo where the rich and powerful men are first seen as heroes (Harvey Weinstein, anyone?) and then the women form a group and together are able to exact justice.

    Looking forward to hearing what you think and thanks a million for your feedback!

    -MF

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