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  1. Posted: May 22, 2020In: Horror

    An? wheelchair-bound college girl must use her physical abilities and mental acumen to save her trapped friends from zombies who have surrounded their cottage.

    Michael Fine Logliner
    Added an answer on May 24, 2020 at 12:30 pm

    It's an interesting point - I thought it would be but a reader who saw my screenplay said, even with the added feature of the friends plotting to kill the wheelchair girl, the hook wasn't good enough.... it's hard for me to tell what would have been a better hook... I really want to tell an empowermRead more

    It’s an interesting point – I thought it would be but a reader who saw my screenplay said, even with the added feature of the friends plotting to kill the wheelchair girl, the hook wasn’t good enough…. it’s hard for me to tell what would have been a better hook… I really want to tell an empowerment plot-based horror flick because I haven’t seen that many produced lately…

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  2. Posted: May 21, 2020In: Horror

    An insecure wheelchair-bound college girl spends the weekend at a cottage with friends where they are attacked by zombies. They don’t know why until she discovers that the zombies were all murder victims of her friends – and she was next.

    Michael Fine Logliner
    Added an answer on May 22, 2020 at 3:08 am

    I agree about the active goal, but the main point of the movie is a disabled girl overcoming her physical disability and emotional insecurity to save her friends (and ultimately herself!) The zombies ending up as the "good guys" is collateral benefit.

    I agree about the active goal, but the main point of the movie is a disabled girl overcoming her physical disability and emotional insecurity to save her friends (and ultimately herself!) The zombies ending up as the “good guys” is collateral benefit.

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  3. Posted: December 31, 2019In: Crime

    A crisis manager gets recruited by the vigilante crew he idolizes to expose how the family business he is paid to protect sells memories.

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    Added an answer on January 1, 2020 at 11:08 am

    Is the fact he is a crisis manager relevant, or does it in any way lead to a conflict or irony? If not, maybe you want to replace "crisis manager" with an description that can create a conflict with your storyline. Since you are talking about vigilantes, maybe you want to change it to "a district atRead more

    Is the fact he is a crisis manager relevant, or does it in any way lead to a conflict or irony? If not, maybe you want to replace “crisis manager” with an description that can create a conflict with your storyline. Since you are talking about vigilantes, maybe you want to change it to “a district attorney,” or “retired cop turned security manager,” some title that visibly puts him in conflict with your story line…. just a thought!

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