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  1. Posted: July 2, 2020In: Drama

    In the aftermath of a school shooting, the perpetrator’s loner best friend becomes a romantically involved with a popular girl who was injured in the incident. Their relationship is put to the test when he is forced to testify at an inquest that he had foreknowledge of the tragedy.

    Michael Fine Logliner
    Added an answer on July 2, 2020 at 1:07 pm

    Thank you. I have a problem because I'm looking to do a deep character piece for the first time. I want to explore the depth of guilt as a paralyzing force - different types of guilt affected different people in different ways. I want the loner best friend to be the POV character and to experience tRead more

    Thank you. I have a problem because I’m looking to do a deep character piece for the first time. I want to explore the depth of guilt as a paralyzing force – different types of guilt affected different people in different ways. I want the loner best friend to be the POV character and to experience the guilt associated with knowing he might have prevented a massacre. The popular young girl I want to be suffering from survivors guilt. Their personal natures cause them to react to their guilt differently. The boy hides from everyone, and the girl gets lost in her work. The coroner’s inquest into the school shooting is the catalyst everyone wants to avoid since it conjures up these negative feelings for seemingly no positive end….. any ideas how a deep character piece like this can be encapsulated in a logline?

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  2. Posted: July 2, 2020In: Drama

    In the aftermath of a school shooting, the perpetrator’s loner best friend becomes a romantically involved with a popular girl who was injured in the incident. Their relationship is put to the test when he is forced to testify at an inquest that he had foreknowledge of the tragedy.

    Michael Fine Logliner
    Replied to answer on July 2, 2020 at 1:02 pm

    Thank you... I prefer the boy as the protagonist, so you've given me some food for thought about how to represent this in the story.

    Thank you… I prefer the boy as the protagonist, so you’ve given me some food for thought about how to represent this in the story.

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  3. Posted: July 2, 2020In: Drama

    In the aftermath of a school shooting, the perpetrator’s loner best friend becomes a romantically involved with a popular girl who was injured in the incident. Their relationship is put to the test when he is forced to testify at an inquest that he had foreknowledge of the tragedy.

    Michael Fine Logliner
    Replied to answer on July 2, 2020 at 1:01 pm

    Thank you... you have given me something to think about.

    Thank you… you have given me something to think about.

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