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  1. Posted: July 9, 2020In: Drama

    In the aftermath of a school shooting, a victim’s non-athletic father who has given up on life finds meaning in coaching his dead son’s basketball team to the championships.

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    Replied to answer on July 10, 2020 at 1:18 am

    This is excellent! Thanks for helping me improve on the logline. The idea is that he had a close relationship with his son before he died but after the shooting his life has gone to hell. His son was the star of the team and loved basketball, but his coach was killed in the shooting and the season iRead more

    This is excellent! Thanks for helping me improve on the logline.
    The idea is that he had a close relationship with his son before he died but after the shooting his life has gone to hell. His son was the star of the team and loved basketball, but his coach was killed in the shooting and the season is in peril of being cancelled. The team is weak but the father owes it to the son to lead his team to the championships. The team which isn’t very good is a metaphor for everyone’s broken spirits after the shooting. By winning they see life can go on.

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  2. Posted: July 2, 2020In: Drama

    In the aftermath of a school shooting, the perpetrator’s loner best friend becomes a romantically involved with a popular girl who was injured in the incident. Their relationship is put to the test when he is forced to testify at an inquest that he had foreknowledge of the tragedy.

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    Replied to answer on July 9, 2020 at 10:59 am

    Thanks. I was toying with the idea that he had foreknowledge of the shooting, but due to his insular nature did not warn anyone... and now the guilt is eating at him....

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    I was toying with the idea that he had foreknowledge of the shooting, but due to his insular nature did not warn anyone… and now the guilt is eating at him….

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  3. Posted: July 2, 2020In: Drama

    In the aftermath of a school shooting, the perpetrator’s loner best friend becomes a romantically involved with a popular girl who was injured in the incident. Their relationship is put to the test when he is forced to testify at an inquest that he had foreknowledge of the tragedy.

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    Replied to answer on July 9, 2020 at 10:57 am

    An interesting point.... I would like this screenplay to be an opportunity for myself to explore the underlying causes of survivor's guilt. As of now, I don't have an answer to your question about why the girl suffers survivor's guilt - indeed, the phenomenon of survivor's guilt is not a "logical" oRead more

    An interesting point….
    I would like this screenplay to be an opportunity for myself to explore the underlying causes of survivor’s guilt. As of now, I don’t have an answer to your question about why the girl suffers survivor’s guilt – indeed, the phenomenon of survivor’s guilt is not a “logical” one – but I can suggest that maybe her best friend took a bullet for her leaving the girl only partially injured…

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