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  1. Posted: December 9, 2020In: Short Film

    A famous and renown band leader can’t play and tour anymore and looks back at when it all started in his childhood

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    Mike Pedley Singularity
    Added an answer on December 10, 2020 at 7:02 pm

    If you want the conflict to be in the band leader's young life that he's looking back at, I would consider writing it without suggesting the older guy is looking back at his life. Whilst it helps tell a story, the bulk of the plot is happening in the past. Alternatively frame it like "A famous bandRead more

    If you want the conflict to be in the band leader’s young life that he’s looking back at, I would consider writing it without suggesting the older guy is looking back at his life. Whilst it helps tell a story, the bulk of the plot is happening in the past. Alternatively frame it like “A famous band leader reflects on his career where he blah blah blah blah”. This way, you’re almost using the present tense as “world building” – it’s needed to understand something about the plot.

    Hope this helps.

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  2. Posted: December 7, 2020In: Drama

    When he killed himself, he left five letters to five people in his life giving each a special task which he believed would bring them happiness. These are their stories.

    Mike Pedley Singularity
    Replied to answer on December 8, 2020 at 6:25 pm

    Great movie! In terms of whom to spotlight, I see this is as kinda like Love Actually. A multi-stranded plot that explores a theme from different perspectives.

    Great movie!

    In terms of whom to spotlight, I see this is as kinda like Love Actually. A multi-stranded plot that explores a theme from different perspectives.

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  3. Posted: December 6, 2020In: Drama

    After he kills an innocent man, an over-zealous activist, who’s become a hitman for environmental causes, decides to defy his controller, his best friend, and to make amends with the victim’s daughter.

    Mike Pedley Singularity
    Added an answer on December 6, 2020 at 7:08 am

    Why will she not just call the police and have him arrested for murder? That's precisely what I'd do!

    Why will she not just call the police and have him arrested for murder? That’s precisely what I’d do!

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