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“When her domineering boyfriend forces her to join the army the Potomac with him, a meek farmgirl fights for the North and for her relationship as she succeeds in battle just as his cowardice grows.”
Do you mean "Army of the Potomac"? I'm from the UK so my American History is not great.Describing him as domineering doesn't make me want them to stay together. Can't they both be happy to sign up but her bravery and his cowardice force them apart on the battlefield? This doesn't bother her, but affRead more
Do you mean “Army of the Potomac”? I’m from the UK so my American History is not great.
Describing him as domineering doesn’t make me want them to stay together. Can’t they both be happy to sign up but her bravery and his cowardice force them apart on the battlefield? This doesn’t bother her, but affects him and their relationship. She begins to enjoy her successes and new found fame. This would really closely connect her success on the battlefield to the degradation of the relationship. Act III is then her making the choice between her fame and the man she loves.
Is this primarily a love story? Is her goal to save the relationship?
See lessA contract killer takes his teenage brother on job hunting down a group of anonymous gangbangers for a Mexican drug cartel to deter the wannabe-thug from a harrowing life of crime.
What?s the inciting incident? There has to be something that triggers the contract killer to take his brother along. I don?t think you need to state the gangbangers are anonymous. I don?t really understand why you?ve included that word anyway...? What was the intention? I?d give the contract killerRead more
What?s the inciting incident? There has to be something that triggers the contract killer to take his brother along.
I don?t think you need to state the gangbangers are anonymous. I don?t really understand why you?ve included that word anyway…? What was the intention?
I?d give the contract killer a characteristic. We can see that he obviously cares about his brother but what?s his character arc?
See lessA man exploits his friends cocaine habit to finish a script by a deadline.
After his deadline is unexpectedly brought forward, a washed up screenwriter snorts his friend's finest Colombian nose-candy in a bid to finish the script in 24 hours.
After his deadline is unexpectedly brought forward, a washed up screenwriter snorts his friend’s finest Colombian nose-candy in a bid to finish the script in 24 hours.
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