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“They say first impressions are the most important. Luckily, twelve-year-old geek, Gordon Periwinkle gets a second.” A reluctant geek looks to create a new image when he is the new kid in school. After he fails miserably, he gets a second chance to re-live that week, this time he takes a completely different path while fully knowing the outcome of each previous decision.
Is he reluctant to change his image? Does he actually like who he is but he feels like he has to change in order to "fit in"? I think the protagonist has to want to do something otherwise the audience will struggle to get behind him. With that in mind I'd maybe change "reluctant" as the primary adjeRead more
Is he reluctant to change his image? Does he actually like who he is but he feels like he has to change in order to “fit in”? I think the protagonist has to want to do something otherwise the audience will struggle to get behind him. With that in mind I’d maybe change “reluctant” as the primary adjective. “Shy” or “introverted” might work better. Like variable said, there has to be a reason for us to root for him.
Personally I kinda like the Groundhog Day / Run, Lola, Run school of absolutely no explanation as to how they happen to be reliving these things BUT at the end there has to be an even better ‘why’. ?If you wanted a how, maybe the coolest kid at the school is revealed to be an ex-nerd and he’s passing down the ability (as it was passed down to him) and in the alternate reality the coolest kid didn’t change from being a nerd at all, he learnt to love himself as he is and he is still the coolest kid.
Good luck with it all.
See lessWhen a military-trained biologist’s husband unexpectedly returns alive from a secret mission, she must go on a quest to a mysterious lighthouse to save his life – and the world.
When her husband returns, the sole survivor of a secret mission, with an incurable illness, a resolute biologist must follow in his footsteps to find the cause and the cure to save him ? and the world. Bit wordy though.
When her husband returns, the sole survivor of a secret mission, with an incurable illness, a resolute biologist must follow in his footsteps to find the cause and the cure to save him ? and the world.
Bit wordy though.
See lessTwo cops take a guy they to beat info out of him regarding another cops murder but he uses their paranoia to get them to turn on each other and release him.
When their former partner is murdered, two shady cops take their lead suspect to beat a confession out of him but when their captive starts playing them against each other, their trust in each other crumbles as their paranoia grows. I'm pretty new to loglines so apologies if this doesn't help. I'm jRead more
When their former partner is murdered, two shady cops take their lead suspect to beat a confession out of him but when their captive starts playing them against each other, their trust in each other crumbles as their paranoia grows.
I’m pretty new to loglines so apologies if this doesn’t help. I’m just getting some practice in.
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