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  1. Posted: June 7, 2018In: Comedy

    As for being a janitor, burger flipper or ditch digger..those jobs are for the other people to do. At the age of 28, Charlie Bean comes to the harsh realization that he just might be the other people.

    Mike Pedley Singularity
    Added an answer on June 8, 2018 at 5:57 pm

    How about something like: After failing another job interview, a proud man must put his ego aside and take any job he can to show his pregnant wife he can provide for his family before the birth of his child.

    How about something like:
    After failing another job interview, a proud man must put his ego aside and take any job he can to show his pregnant wife he can provide for his family before the birth of his child.

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  2. Posted: June 8, 2018In: Drama

    When his kinky girlfriend is apprehended by bounty hunters, a rich playboy is forced to team up with a hot-headed southern belle, as they delve into the seedy world of LA?s high-class S&M society, hoping to uncover clues to her whereabouts.

    Mike Pedley Singularity
    Added an answer on June 8, 2018 at 6:00 am

    ?Hoping to uncover clues...? hoping isn?t particularly dynamic. It makes it sound like they?re not sure where to look. Maybe it just needs to be ?as the clues they uncover lead them into the bowels of LA?s high-class...? Who forces them to team up and why? If he?s a wealthy playboy can?t he just payRead more

    ?Hoping to uncover clues…? hoping isn?t particularly dynamic. It makes it sound like they?re not sure where to look. Maybe it just needs to be ?as the clues they uncover lead them into the bowels of LA?s high-class…?

    Who forces them to team up and why? If he?s a wealthy playboy can?t he just pay someone else? What?s the southern belle?s stake in it? Why is she looking for the kinky girlfriend too?

    As Richiev also pointed out, what?s the connection between bounty hunters and S&M?

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  3. Posted: June 7, 2018In: Comedy

    Documentary filmmaker Ted Riley is hot on the trail of the phenomenon that?s sweeping the city of Bakersfield. In the vein of “Robin Hood” a father and his pre-teen sons make a living from stealing from second hand shops and selling the goods at a more reasonable price at various swap meets in their local area.? Petty crooks or men with a mission? Ted Riley seeks that answer as he captures a raw and voyeuristic look into one of Bakersfield’s most notorious crime families.?

    Mike Pedley Singularity
    Added an answer on June 8, 2018 at 5:45 am

    Robin Hood stole from the rich to give to the poor. I can?t imagine second-hand shops would be classed as ?rich? establishments (I could be wrong). Why not make it large, wealthy department stores? Why would they let a documentary filmmaker film them committing a crime? Is the protagonist the familyRead more

    Robin Hood stole from the rich to give to the poor. I can?t imagine second-hand shops would be classed as ?rich? establishments (I could be wrong). Why not make it large, wealthy department stores?

    Why would they let a documentary filmmaker film them committing a crime? Is the protagonist the family or the filmmaker? I think the story should focus on the family as that?s where the interesting conflict is. If the audience?s link to this story is through the filmmaker, all they?ll ever get is a fly-on-wall point of view rather than actually caring about what the family are doing. Surely the filmmaker just wants to make a good film so you could argue that he doesn?t actually care what happens to the family as long as it?s interesting. There?s definitely a story in there but I think it?s overcomplicated.

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