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  1. Posted: June 28, 2020In: TVPOD

    A sexually awkward high school student begins giving out sex therapy at his school to help him get his dream girl

    Mike Pedley Singularity
    Added an answer on June 30, 2020 at 7:26 pm

    This is just 'Sex Education' right? If so, should it be in the 'Examples' category instead?

    This is just ‘Sex Education’ right? If so, should it be in the ‘Examples’ category instead?

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  2. Posted: June 29, 2020In: SciFi

    When a skeptic psychiatrist witnesses his pregnant wife being abducted by aliens, he teams up with his abductee patient in order to get her back.

    Mike Pedley Singularity
    Added an answer on June 30, 2020 at 7:21 pm

    I like this. I think "skeptic" might not be the right choice for his characteristic. Only because it's resolved as soon as he witnesses his wife's abduction. Chances are, within the first 15 mins or so, this arc is completed. I'd kinda like the goal to be expanded on a little. I'd like to know moreRead more

    I like this.

    I think “skeptic” might not be the right choice for his characteristic. Only because it’s resolved as soon as he witnesses his wife’s abduction. Chances are, within the first 15 mins or so, this arc is completed.

    I’d kinda like the goal to be expanded on a little. I’d like to know more specifics about how they’re planning on getting her back. Maybe his abductee patient has a set of skills? I’d just like to be able to visualise their actions in Act II a little more.

    Looking forward to seeing where this goes.

    Hope this helps.

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  3. Posted: June 18, 2020In: Action

    A traumatized ex-military professor must protect his students when he discovers that the dean and his colleagues are spies sent to eliminate him in a dangerous exercise of trust.

    Mike Pedley Singularity
    Added an answer on June 18, 2020 at 6:34 pm

    Why must he protect his students when he is the only one that is the target? As hobbes said, what is a dangerous exercise of trust? Who is meant to be trusting who? In a film about spies, I think the general rule (and somewhat cliched) is trust no-one. Surely his goal is to eliminate those trying toRead more

    Why must he protect his students when he is the only one that is the target? As hobbes said, what is a dangerous exercise of trust? Who is meant to be trusting who? In a film about spies, I think the general rule (and somewhat cliched) is trust no-one.

    Surely his goal is to eliminate those trying to eliminate him? What’s his arc?

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