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  1. Posted: July 9, 2021In: Coming of Age

    Six interwined stories about high school students dealing with bullies and high school cliques.

    Mike Pedley Singularity
    Replied to answer on July 13, 2021 at 5:30 pm

    That's not a theme, that's a setting.

    That’s not a theme, that’s a setting.

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  2. Posted: July 3, 2021In: Drama

    After her father’s bankruptcy, a high school student determined to attend Harvard must outwit two high school teachers who involve her in a cruel wager to determine whether two students can be made to fall in love.

    Mike Pedley Singularity
    Added an answer on July 12, 2021 at 6:01 pm

    There's a disconnect here between the inciting incident and the goal. Harvard is expensive... so is she trying to get a scholarship? If so, we kinda need to know that. What relevance does the wager have on her journey to Harvard? If she successfully outwits the two teachers, it doesn't guarantee a pRead more

    There’s a disconnect here between the inciting incident and the goal. Harvard is expensive… so is she trying to get a scholarship? If so, we kinda need to know that. What relevance does the wager have on her journey to Harvard? If she successfully outwits the two teachers, it doesn’t guarantee a place in Harvard so what’s the connection?

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  3. Posted: July 9, 2021In: Coming of Age

    Six interwined stories about high school students dealing with bullies and high school cliques.

    Mike Pedley Singularity
    Added an answer on July 12, 2021 at 5:55 pm

    For a story that is a multi-stranded narrative, the logline must be framed around the theme of the story. What is the theme here?

    For a story that is a multi-stranded narrative, the logline must be framed around the theme of the story. What is the theme here?

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