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After his girlfriend who was kidnapped from a hospital, a police officer must race against time to stop robbers from planning a terrorist plot at a building.
I don't understand this logline at all, I'm afraid. What does his girlfriend's kidnapping have to do with a terrorist plot? Why would robbers plan a terrorist plot? Or is it a Die Hard kinda thing? The goal is to stop them planning the plot... not actually stopping the plot while it's in play. VisuaRead more
I don’t understand this logline at all, I’m afraid.
What does his girlfriend’s kidnapping have to do with a terrorist plot? Why would robbers plan a terrorist plot? Or is it a Die Hard kinda thing? The goal is to stop them planning the plot… not actually stopping the plot while it’s in play. Visually, it would more interesting to stop it while it’s happening.
There NEEDS to be a connection between the elements. If the Inciting Incident is the kidnapping of the girlfriend then why isn’t the goal to rescue his girlfriend????
See lessA high school student uses her psychological ability to invade dreams by getting revenge on her older sister.
Why does she want to get revenge on her older sister? How does invading her dreams do that? Freddie Kruger invades dreams but with the goal of killing the kids. As it currently stands, I'm not sure I understand. It seems like you're suggesting that by getting revenge on her older sister, she is ableRead more
Why does she want to get revenge on her older sister? How does invading her dreams do that? Freddie Kruger invades dreams but with the goal of killing the kids.
As it currently stands, I’m not sure I understand. It seems like you’re suggesting that by getting revenge on her older sister, she is able to invade dreams? Is that right? I feel like it might be a typo…
See lessWhen a selfish store clerk finds himself in the middle-ages, he clumsily awakens an ancient evil in an effort to return home; in doing so, he finds himself fighting armies of un-dead to not only save himself but humanity.
I agree with Lempicka. I think it's worth unpacking what the "ancient evil" wants to achieve so we understand what's at stake. Why is humanity at risk?It's pretty solid though, a little long, but I think that's inevitable given the time-travel, fantasy elements. Good work.?
I agree with Lempicka. I think it’s worth unpacking what the “ancient evil” wants to achieve so we understand what’s at stake. Why is humanity at risk?
It’s pretty solid though, a little long, but I think that’s inevitable given the time-travel, fantasy elements. Good work.?
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