1. Posted: October 31, 2017In:

    When a famous tennis player have his wife murdered by a psychotic socialite he met on the train, he needs to prove his innocence in a crisscross murder he never agreed to.

    moviefreak81 Samurai

    Thanks dpg, one thing does do substitue the other. One can't learn how to paint or play piano or any other craft without actually doing it, and by learning other loglines posted here is a good complement. Based on Foxtrot 25's post: One thing that is becoming clearer and clearer to me is that for ouRead more

    Thanks dpg, one thing does do substitue the other. One can’t learn how to paint or play piano or any other craft without actually doing it, and by learning other loglines posted here is a good complement.

    Based on Foxtrot 25’s post: One thing that is becoming clearer and clearer to me is that for outsiders pitching, one there is some sort of limitation regarding the story format, so the logline and hook gets very clearly across a single sentence. It’s not a huuuuge limitator in my view, but I think the more the writer is aware of the boundaries, closer it is to a great logline/idea…

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  2. Posted: October 31, 2017In:

    When a famous tennis player have his wife murdered by a psychotic socialite he met on the train, he needs to prove his innocence in a crisscross murder he never agreed to.

    moviefreak81 Samurai

    Cool.. do you have these loglines shared somewhere? I'd be pretty much interested in reading them...?? Your logline is embarassingly? better :D I've tried an attempt on top of your take... let me know what you think. 34 words After refusing a stranger?s offer to kill his hated wife in exchange for hRead more

    Cool.. do you have these loglines shared somewhere? I’d be pretty much interested in reading them…?? Your logline is embarassingly? better 😀

    I’ve tried an attempt on top of your take… let me know what you think. 34 words

    After refusing a stranger?s offer to kill his hated wife in exchange for his killing the stranger?s hated father, a man must prove his innocence when the stranger demand his part of the bargain.

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  3. Posted: October 31, 2017In:

    When a famous tennis player have his wife murdered by a psychotic socialite he met on the train, he needs to prove his innocence in a crisscross murder he never agreed to.

    moviefreak81 Samurai

    This logline seems to be very tricky to me... The problem is that the "crisscross" situation is hard to describe together with the murder, so I left it to the end.. not sure if it came across in a clear way...

    This logline seems to be very tricky to me… The problem is that the “crisscross” situation is hard to describe together with the murder, so I left it to the end.. not sure if it came across in a clear way…

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