1. Posted: October 29, 2017In:

    After having her father killed, a farm girl must endure a journey with a tough US marshall to get her revenge.

    moviefreak81 Samurai

    thanks for both long and short version LOL I was familiar with the "Meden Agan" (nothing in excess) from the greeks but not the word "sophrosyn?". Good stuff..? for the logline I think it's pretty good with "stubborn" and "tough, drunken".

    thanks for both long and short version LOL
    I was familiar with the “Meden Agan” (nothing in excess) from the greeks but not the word “sophrosyn?”.

    Good stuff..? for the logline I think it’s pretty good with “stubborn” and “tough, drunken”.

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  2. Posted: October 29, 2017In:

    After having her father killed, a farm girl must endure a journey with a tough US marshall to get her revenge.

    moviefreak81 Samurai

    Thanks dpg, learning a lot with your inputs. Just a question here, since you are a fan of slim loglines... why do you think it is necessary 3 adjectives for the protagonist? If I had to cut one, perhaps I'd pick "revengeful". I'd assume she is since she was after her father's murderer?

    Thanks dpg, learning a lot with your inputs. Just a question here, since you are a fan of slim loglines… why do you think it is necessary 3 adjectives for the protagonist? If I had to cut one, perhaps I’d pick “revengeful”. I’d assume she is since she was after her father’s murderer?

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  3. Posted: October 29, 2017In:

    When two young couple fall in love, they must fight their families rivalry if they are to live their romance.

    moviefreak81 Samurai

    And your version gives a little more of the plot. Since the logline is intended for producers, perhaps your version would be preferable :)

    And your version gives a little more of the plot. Since the logline is intended for producers, perhaps your version would be preferable 🙂

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