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  1. Posted: October 29, 2017In: Examples

    When two young couple fall in love, they must fight their families rivalry if they are to live their romance.

    moviefreak81 Samurai
    Added an answer on October 29, 2017 at 11:12 pm

    My attempt at Romeo and Juliet...

    My attempt at Romeo and Juliet…

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  2. Posted: October 22, 2017In: Action

    When a captured demon finally finds a way to get rid of, a magician and a ex nun have to risk their lives in order to save the kingdom from a vengeful demon.

    moviefreak81 Samurai
    Added an answer on October 22, 2017 at 11:12 pm

    To me, the most difficult part of the logline is to add specifics with a hook. For instance, "finds a way" is vague, but there is room to add a hook there. If the vengeful demon is the same, the reason he's been trapped also explains the vengence reason. Also the adjective seems to be reworded, as hRead more

    To me, the most difficult part of the logline is to add specifics with a hook. For instance, “finds a way” is vague, but there is room to add a hook there. If the vengeful demon is the same, the reason he’s been trapped also explains the vengence reason.
    Also the adjective seems to be reworded, as how thieves can be honest? Perhaps good-hearted?

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