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  1. Posted: March 22, 2018In: Examples

    When a low life trickster loses his partner, he must perform the great con with a once legendary con artist to escape the dangerous ganster he stole money from.

    moviefreak81 Samurai
    Added an answer on March 26, 2018 at 11:34 pm

    Indeed, a protagonist that isn't driving the plot forward (reactive) is not worth being the protagonist. That reminded me of Harrison Ford in the Fugitive. There is a constant 'survival' pressure on him, but still he is making all the calls. I guess it all makes a better sense...? if I was going toRead more

    Indeed, a protagonist that isn’t driving the plot forward (reactive) is not worth being the protagonist. That reminded me of Harrison Ford in the Fugitive. There is a constant ‘survival’ pressure on him, but still he is making all the calls.
    I guess it all makes a better sense…? if I was going to rewrite it to a more proactive.. “When a low life trickster loses his partner, he must perform the great con with a once legendary con artist to avenge his friend.”

    In this more proactive approach, the logline makes Hooker looks more badass than the really is heheh

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  2. Posted: March 24, 2018In: Examples

    When four men are hired to deliver nitroglyrcering shipment at a remote oil field, they can make no mistakes if they are to deliver the dangerous cargo alive. – Wages of Fear

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    Added an answer on March 26, 2018 at 11:24 pm

    Nir, the obstacle standing is the rugged roads as dpg pointed out, but I think the biggest obstacle that was clear to me when watching the movie was the relationship between the drivers. That stood out with the resilience (and/or reckless) of the character Mario vs Mr. Jo. Or if wasn't biggest obstaRead more

    Nir, the obstacle standing is the rugged roads as dpg pointed out, but I think the biggest obstacle that was clear to me when watching the movie was the relationship between the drivers. That stood out with the resilience (and/or reckless) of the character Mario vs Mr. Jo. Or if wasn’t biggest obstacle it was a considerable catalyst of the tension and aggravation of the antagonism forces.

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  3. Posted: March 22, 2018In: Examples

    When an American painter in Paris is discovered by an influential heiress, he has to deal with her and his rival friend if he is to date his true love.

    moviefreak81 Samurai
    Added an answer on March 26, 2018 at 11:22 pm

    Hmmm yes.. perhaps the proposed logline format won't do much good for this genre indeed. Or in the very least, it doesn't sound as catchy...

    Hmmm yes.. perhaps the proposed logline format won’t do much good for this genre indeed. Or in the very least, it doesn’t sound as catchy…

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