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A young aid worker learns humanity has been manipulated for aeons. He must learn control time to save humanity and the people he loves.
This logline by MadMovieManiac on imdb about back to the future: http://www.imdb.com/title/tt0088763/plotsummary "After being accidentally sent 30 years into the past in a time-travelling DeLorean invented by the mad scientist Dr. Emmett Brown, Marty McFly has to find a way to return to the future aRead more
This logline by MadMovieManiac on imdb about back to the future: http://www.imdb.com/title/tt0088763/plotsummary
“After being accidentally sent 30 years into the past in a time-travelling DeLorean invented by the mad scientist Dr. Emmett Brown, Marty McFly has to find a way to return to the future and make his parents fall in love again to ensure his own existence.”
Notice that it states the time-travelling DeLorean, states objectively what the character has to do (instead of vague “must learn how to control time”), and the stakes (he might cease to exist).
See lessI guess all the tips above boil down to be more specific about the description so the hook is more visible.
When his friend is kidnapped by ruthless thugs, an ex con trying to get his life together, must save her using ninja skills accidentally acquired through a backyard sobriety experiment. Comedy/Drama
Hi Benny, I'm new here so I'm giving it a (first) shot... In the first part I got to re-read about the psychological experiment, and it seemed a bit vague to me, but I know sometimes it's hard to come up with the correct words. I'd try to experiment and see if it is interchangeable (in many cases itRead more
Hi Benny, I’m new here so I’m giving it a (first) shot…
In the first part I got to re-read about the psychological experiment, and it seemed a bit vague to me, but I know sometimes it’s hard to come up with the correct words. I’d try to experiment and see if it is interchangeable (in many cases it’s not).
I’m not sure if I got correctly the part it says “seven days to get her back”. Who’s her?
The newly gained ninja skill before they expire looks like the hook to me and I liked it. Sounds fun.
See lessWhen a magic notebook that kills who has a name written on it falls in the hand of a student that uses it to kill criminals, the law enforcement must find a way to stop him.
I could not find the "classics" category to post (category of movies, etc) The logline is for "Death Note" mang?, by the way.
I could not find the “classics” category to post (category of movies, etc)
See lessThe logline is for “Death Note” mang?, by the way.