Sign Up Sign Up

Captcha Click on image to update the captcha.

Have an account? Sign In Now

Sign In Sign In

Forgot Password?

If you'd like access, Sign Up Here

Forgot Password Forgot Password

Lost your password? Please enter your email address. You will receive a link and will create a new password via email.

Captcha Click on image to update the captcha.

Have an account? Sign In Now

Sorry, you do not have permission to ask a question, You must login to ask a question.

Forgot Password?

To see everything, Sign Up Here

Sorry, you do not have permission to ask a question, You must login to ask a question.

Forgot Password?

To see everything, Sign Up Here

Please briefly explain why you feel this question should be reported.

Please briefly explain why you feel this answer should be reported.

Please briefly explain why you feel this user should be reported.

Logline It! Logo Logline It! Logo
Sign InSign Up

Logline It!

Logline It! Navigation

  • Sign Up
  • Logline Generator
  • Learn our simple Logline Formula
  • Search Loglines
Search
Post Your Logline

Mobile menu

Close
Post Your Logline
  • Signup
  • Sign Up
  • Logline Generator
  • Learn our simple Logline Formula
  • Search Loglines
  • About
  • Questions
  • Answers
  • Best Answers
  1. Posted: October 22, 2017In: Examples

    When a magic notebook that kills who has a name written on it falls in the hand of a student that uses it to kill criminals, the law enforcement must find a way to stop him.

    moviefreak81 Samurai
    Added an answer on October 22, 2017 at 9:27 pm

    I think basically the author play with our morals... in Breaking Bad, we definitely root for Walt, maybe until the point we think "well.. perhaps he have gone too far..." when he confess to Skyler his real reason. In Death Note at first we might root to Raito, the student who finds the notebook andRead more

    I think basically the author play with our morals… in Breaking Bad, we definitely root for Walt, maybe until the point we think “well.. perhaps he have gone too far…” when he confess to Skyler his real reason.

    In Death Note at first we might root to Raito, the student who finds the notebook and decide to kill criminals.. but at then I think it depends on where the audience stand about “vigilantes”. If I. Kant would read the comics he would definitely root for “L” since the beginning hahah.?? But yes, personally I’d put Raito for protagonist and L (and police) as antagonist. It looks like the author twists that at some point in the story as if he is making a point regarding making justice with his own hands.

    Now thinking about it, I don’t remember that Raito even has a personal reason to use the notebook, (like Batman who had his parents killed, etc…)

    See less
    • 0
    • Share
      Share
      • Share on Facebook
      • Share on Twitter
      • Share on LinkedIn
      • Share on WhatsApp
  2. Posted: October 22, 2017In: Examples

    When a magic notebook that kills who has a name written on it falls in the hand of a student that uses it to kill criminals, the law enforcement must find a way to stop him.

    moviefreak81 Samurai
    Added an answer on October 22, 2017 at 10:48 am

    hmmmm that makes sense. In this case, the character "L", a super detective that rivals Raito's (protagonist) intellect should be in place of the "law enforcement".

    hmmmm that makes sense. In this case, the character “L”, a super detective that rivals Raito’s (protagonist) intellect should be in place of the “law enforcement”.

    See less
    • 0
    • Share
      Share
      • Share on Facebook
      • Share on Twitter
      • Share on LinkedIn
      • Share on WhatsApp
  3. Posted: October 22, 2017In: Examples

    When a magic notebook that kills who has a name written on it falls in the hand of a student that uses it to kill criminals, the law enforcement must find a way to stop him.

    moviefreak81 Samurai
    Added an answer on October 22, 2017 at 10:41 am

    Yes, you are right... I was browing past posts and it was brought up (I guess it was the logline about Big Lebowski) that questioned about that a logline from Cohen Brothers if came from a writer without proven record etc etc it might well be discarded. What I had in mind when I brought up that examRead more

    Yes, you are right… I was browing past posts and it was brought up (I guess it was the logline about Big Lebowski) that questioned about that a logline from Cohen Brothers if came from a writer without proven record etc etc it might well be discarded.
    What I had in mind when I brought up that example is that, if ASOIF did not exist, and a new author came up with this very same saga, and was pitching to a publisher, maybe he/she would have a hard time to craft a logline (or even a 1 page summary) that truly reflect the quality of the work (and the hook).

    See less
    • 0
    • Share
      Share
      • Share on Facebook
      • Share on Twitter
      • Share on LinkedIn
      • Share on WhatsApp
1 … 14 15 16 17 18

Sidebar

Stats

  • Loglines 7,997
  • Reviews 32,189
  • Best Reviews 629
  • Users 3,710

screenwriting courses

Adv 120x600

aalan

Explore

  • Signup

Footer

© 2022 Karel Segers. All Rights Reserved
With Love from Immersion Screenwriting.