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When the feisty pirate emperor kidnaps their kingdom, an abominable feline-human boy and a weak princess must find someone in the “awfully violent” neighboring empire closed enough to accuse him to the emperor’s dubious mother before marrying their queen in a wrestling presentation.
Now pare down that detail into the protagonist, antagonist, conflict, and stakes, in one sentence, with an indication of tone and genre. Then try other verbs and adjectives, see what sounds good. Be clear, be simple, be concise. And always verify spelling and grammar. A hybrid human-feline boy mustRead more
Now pare down that detail into the protagonist, antagonist, conflict, and stakes, in one sentence, with an indication of tone and genre. Then try other verbs and adjectives, see what sounds good. Be clear, be simple, be concise. And always verify spelling and grammar.
A hybrid human-feline boy must help a shy princess save her peaceful kingdom from the Awfully Violent Islands…whose King wants to marry her mom and destroy all humankind!
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Then surely help will be offered once additional logline-relevant details or questions are posted.
Then surely help will be offered once additional logline-relevant details or questions are posted.
See lessWhen the feisty pirate emperor kidnaps their kingdom, an abominable feline-human boy and a weak princess must find someone in the “awfully violent” neighboring empire closed enough to accuse him to the emperor’s dubious mother before marrying their queen in a wrestling presentation.
What are you talking about? Why are you giving orders? Who are you? Do you want logline feedback or not?
What are you talking about? Why are you giving orders? Who are you? Do you want logline feedback or not?
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