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  1. Posted: May 30, 2013In: Public

    (Historical biopic) about the true stories of Susan B. Anthony & Elizabeth Cady Stanton and how they personally and politically changed the world! However they both kept one secret hidden from each other and themselves which led to inner personal disaster.

    mulford sibly
    Added an answer on June 5, 2013 at 4:27 am

    I would like to see why they had a strong desire to cause change. Were they victims of discrimination themselves? Did they suffer humiliation at the polling place, and in the legal system? Did they run into verbal and physical abuse when they tried to change the world? Many of us are not up to speedRead more

    I would like to see why they had a strong desire to cause change. Were they victims of discrimination themselves? Did they suffer humiliation at the polling place, and in the legal system? Did they run into verbal and physical abuse when they tried to change the world? Many of us are not up to speed on their history. My story also lacks blood, aliens, etc. I think we can still write captivating stories without them. Not every movie has to appeal to overgrown, immature boys.

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  2. Posted: May 28, 2013In: Public

    A self-centered race car mechanic must infiltrate a large corporate sponsor to learn the truth about her grandfather's death.

    mulford sibly
    Added an answer on June 5, 2013 at 4:11 am

    Thank you for mentioning Hitchcock. He said that mystery does not generate emotion in an audience. At the end of Act II in my story, the hero figures out that several deaths are collateral damage, not random failures or accidents. She also sees that the villains are quite serious about death to snitRead more

    Thank you for mentioning Hitchcock. He said that mystery does not generate emotion in an audience. At the end of Act II in my story, the hero figures out that several deaths are collateral damage, not random failures or accidents. She also sees that the villains are quite serious about death to snitches. Perhaps I could start my story at this point. Your help is certainly appreciated.

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  3. Posted: May 27, 2013In: Public

    A hedonistic med student unwillingly becomes a single father, but when he discovers the newborn is not even biologically his, he?s faced with a difficult decision- dad or doctor?

    mulford sibly
    Added an answer on May 28, 2013 at 5:48 am

    I like a hedonistic med student facing a difficult decision. I would like to see the goal of his quest: best life for the newborn? med student clearing his reputation? avoiding financial responsibility? I still need a little help understanding "unwillingly becomes a single father."

    I like a hedonistic med student facing a difficult decision. I would like to see the goal of his quest: best life for the newborn? med student clearing his reputation? avoiding financial responsibility? I still need a little help understanding “unwillingly becomes a single father.”

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