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  1. Posted: April 15, 2013In: Public

    When Air Force One crashes, a journalist discovers a cover up after gaining access to the plane?s black box data and must unravel the mystery.

    mulford sibly
    Added an answer on May 28, 2013 at 5:39 am

    The logline is effective because it makes it easy to visualize a surprised and scared journalist. A three dimensional journalist, with conflicts and a character flaw, would add interest. We feel sympathy for him, and cheer for him, but need some reason to identify with him.

    The logline is effective because it makes it easy to visualize a surprised and scared journalist. A three dimensional journalist, with conflicts and a character flaw, would add interest. We feel sympathy for him, and cheer for him, but need some reason to identify with him.

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  2. Posted: April 15, 2013In: Public

    In a world where sadness is punishable by death, and the broken-hearted must gather in secret, a singer of melancholy songs struggles to incarnate the true love he's found in his dreams in order to escape the oppression of his waking life.

    mulford sibly
    Added an answer on April 16, 2013 at 1:14 am

    I love a struggle against the Thought Police. Please give us a clue about the true love, what she does, will she betray him. any moral weakness in either main character would add a dimension of humanity and interest.

    I love a struggle against the Thought Police. Please give us a clue about the true love, what she does, will she betray him. any moral weakness in either main character would add a dimension of humanity and interest.

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  3. Posted: April 11, 2013In: Public

    Abandoned by his platoon, a patriotic soldier befriends a young Muslim girl and must choose between protecting her or helping his team eradicate her village.

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    Added an answer on April 16, 2013 at 1:03 am

    Patriotic soldier is a goody-two-shoes. If he has a character flaw or moral weakness, we may find sympathy and decide to turn the page.

    Patriotic soldier is a goody-two-shoes. If he has a character flaw or moral weakness, we may find sympathy and decide to turn the page.

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