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  1. Posted: January 25, 2013In: Public

    A seemingly ideal Bible Belt family man, is shaken to the core by a secret romance with a handsome young country and western singer that brings him his first real happiness, and the potential to destroy his life and the lives of everyone around him.

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    Added an answer on February 3, 2013 at 8:27 pm

    Thank you very much for the suggestion. The only important part that's left out here (and probably not clear enough in my original) is that the country singer is a man.

    Thank you very much for the suggestion. The only important part that’s left out here (and probably not clear enough in my original) is that the country singer is a man.

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  2. Posted: January 27, 2013In: Public

    As a young man, Ted Geisel meets his future wife Helen, who encourages his fanciful drawings, and in the 1950s when Ted is struggling professionally, Helen helps inspire the children?s book that will become his first big hit, ?The Cat in the Hat.

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    Added an answer on January 28, 2013 at 11:01 am

    Who doesn't love Dr. Seuss??? Great idea! Your logline is a bit long, though. Suggestion: 'Ted Geisel meets his future wife Helen, who encourages his fanciful drawings. When he reaches his breaking point professionally, she helps inspire his first big hit, The Cat in the Hat". Then to make it trulyRead more

    Who doesn’t love Dr. Seuss??? Great idea! Your logline is a bit long, though. Suggestion: ‘Ted Geisel meets his future wife Helen, who encourages his fanciful drawings. When he reaches his breaking point professionally, she helps inspire his first big hit, The Cat in the Hat”.

    Then to make it truly memorable, say the same thing, and set it in a Dr. Seuss rhyme pattern.

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  3. Posted: January 27, 2013In: Public

    When alien crafts land around the world, a linguistics expert is recruited by the military to determine whether they come in peace or are a threat. As she learns to communicate with the aliens, she begins experiencing vivid flashbacks that become the key to unlocking the greater mystery about the true purpose of their visit.

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    Added an answer on January 28, 2013 at 10:41 am

    I really like this premise! The logline could use a bit of cleaning/shortening, perhaps: As she learns to communicate with the aliens, she experiences flashbacks that help her to unlock their actual intensions.

    I really like this premise! The logline could use a bit of cleaning/shortening, perhaps: As she learns to communicate with the aliens, she experiences flashbacks that help her to unlock their actual intensions.

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