1. Posted: January 19, 2013In:

    When Alice finally realizes her students are all idiots and her co-workers are losers, she decidest to get together with Amanda and Megan for some after school drinks.

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    Is this for a short film? You have perhaps 3 minutes of material here, 5 if you stretch it. Not very gripping or interesting as subject matter, even for a short.

    Is this for a short film? You have perhaps 3 minutes of material here, 5 if you stretch it. Not very gripping or interesting as subject matter, even for a short.

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  2. Posted: January 25, 2013In:

    A forgotten pop music icon stuck in the past, stages his own death to generate a spike in record sales and takes on an alias as an underground rapper to avoid an aggressive fraud detective.

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    Interesting movie concept with the potential for some great music. "forgotten" and "stuck in the past" seems redundant. Also, "to generate record sales" would seem sufficient.

    Interesting movie concept with the potential for some great music. “forgotten” and “stuck in the past” seems redundant. Also, “to generate record sales” would seem sufficient.

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  3. Posted: January 19, 2013In:

    When an unremarkable adman comes home to find his neglected wife half dead from the drink, he realises that in the grand scheme of things Advertising just isn't that important, and isn't frightened to say what he thinks anymore. His new found confidence sweeps everyone up with him, taking him to the very top, until his wife brings him back down.

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    Does his being an 'adman' have any significance? Is this a comedy - is there any way you can give us a bit more of a clue what kind of film this is?

    Does his being an ‘adman’ have any significance? Is this a comedy – is there any way you can give us a bit more of a clue what kind of film this is?

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