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In order to graduate film school, a self-centered student documents his terminally ill father’s attempt to recapture the heart of a former lover, prior to her impending marriage.
Agreed with DPG, and to that matter there's no need to mention the son at all.
Agreed with DPG, and to that matter there’s no need to mention the son at all.
See lessIn order to graduate film school, a self-centered student documents his terminally ill father’s attempt to recapture the heart of a former lover, prior to her impending marriage.
If the intention is for him to film the father as part of a school assignment, it needs to be made clearer in the logline.
If the intention is for him to film the father as part of a school assignment, it needs to be made clearer in the logline.
See lessWhen she’s implanted with the memory of a murder, a rookie cop must use inconsistencies between the memory and the physical evidence to catch the real killer.
This feels like a twist on an average police procedural episode - a murder takes place and a cop discovers evidence to solve the case. Aside form the memory device scifi element, can you perhaps raise the stakes on a personal level? Or make the killer a greater threat to a specific group of people?Read more
This feels like a twist on an average police procedural episode – a murder takes place and a cop discovers evidence to solve the case.
Aside form the memory device scifi element, can you perhaps raise the stakes on a personal level? Or make the killer a greater threat to a specific group of people? Or include a government conspiracy? Make the implications greater than just this one case.
Just seems that after the memory thing is introduced this becomes very similar to many shows already available on TV.
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