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A materialistic sell-sword is sent to discover what had stopped the flow of magic that runs the city, but when he learns that the source of the power is the harvested souls of his race, he fights the king to liberate his people.
Dang. That "had" should be a "has"
Dang. That “had” should be a “has”
See lessThree fathers learn of their teenage daughters? pact to lose their virginity on prom night and band together to stop them.
This sounds like a fresh spin on the "losing your virginity on prom night" genre. Definitely would watch. My only query regarding the logline is that it'd be good to get a greater sense of WHAT the fathers intend to do in order to stop their daughters' pact. But to be honest, it's evocative enough wRead more
This sounds like a fresh spin on the “losing your virginity on prom night” genre. Definitely would watch. My only query regarding the logline is that it’d be good to get a greater sense of WHAT the fathers intend to do in order to stop their daughters’ pact. But to be honest, it’s evocative enough without it. Can definitely picture scenes from this film from the logline alone.
See lessAfter watching his parents being brutally murdered, a young boy finds a magical portal to an alien planet, where he must learn their ways so he can avenge their deaths.
I didn't actually think that the aliens killed his parents? It doesn't read like that to me, at least. I started reading this and though "oh god ... another super hero ...", but I think the 'travelling to an alien world' segment is genuinely interesting. i think what works so well about it is as anRead more
I didn’t actually think that the aliens killed his parents? It doesn’t read like that to me, at least.
I started reading this and though “oh god … another super hero …”, but I think the ‘travelling to an alien world’ segment is genuinely interesting. i think what works so well about it is as an audience member, we might be questioning whether he ever went to another world at all. It’s the kind of traumatic experience that might cause us to invent something crazy like meeting aliens who teach us how seek vengeance as a coping mechanism.
I don’t like straight revenge fantasies, so I hope in the script it doesn’t turn out quite like that, but for now you’ve peaked my interest.
One quibble – is there a better way to describe your protagonist than ‘young’? Something about the type of character that he is?
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