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In a world with real monsters, a desperate griffin and his team fight through the expanding zombie horde to deliver an immune human to their superiors.
^ "Immune means the human can?t be infected, so why does he have to be saved? Uninfected has more risk, more danger and more urgency." Good observation.
^ “Immune means the human can?t be infected, so why does he have to be saved? Uninfected has more risk, more danger and more urgency.”
See lessGood observation.
When his pregnant wife is murdered, a grieving husband must kill the man responsible before joining her in the afterlife.
Poromaa's suggestion is good - the vengeance killing is the qualifier for the man's soul to pass onto the afterlife. If you've got something like that in there, it makes the story unique - gives it a hook. Without it, the film just sounds like a bog standard revenge flick.
Poromaa’s suggestion is good – the vengeance killing is the qualifier for the man’s soul to pass onto the afterlife. If you’ve got something like that in there, it makes the story unique – gives it a hook. Without it, the film just sounds like a bog standard revenge flick.
See lessCreative youth in search of the spark that will change their lives
This logline is way too vague. What is the event that sets the story into motion? What is the goal - "the spark that will change their life" doesn't tell us anything. Every hero in the history of story telling has been looking for the spark that will change their life, whether they knew it or not. WRead more
This logline is way too vague. What is the event that sets the story into motion? What is the goal – “the spark that will change their life” doesn’t tell us anything. Every hero in the history of story telling has been looking for the spark that will change their life, whether they knew it or not. What are the stakes of failure?
See lessRegarding rjsilva’s observation that there is no obstacle – you absolutely need one.