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  1. Posted: June 28, 2020In: TVPOD

    When a car accident sends him back to the 1970s a by-the-book, politically correct detective finds himself working in the “flying squad”, a special crimes unit infamous for using illeagal and brutal tactics.

    Nicholas Andrew Halls Samurai
    Added an answer on June 28, 2020 at 12:54 pm

    I think you've bullseyed the series engine. I'd just want to give it a polish on word choice, but all of that is up to personal preference anyway!

    I think you’ve bullseyed the series engine.

    I’d just want to give it a polish on word choice, but all of that is up to personal preference anyway!

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  2. Posted: June 28, 2020In: TVPOD

    When a pie-maker with the ability to bring people back from the dead, revives his child-hood sweetheart, he and his detective side kick work to find her killer before the killer strikes again.

    Nicholas Andrew Halls Samurai
    Added an answer on June 28, 2020 at 12:51 pm

    I think you've nailed the engine of the show. But seeing it written down like that, it's hard to imagine how that story is going to play out over multiple episodes/seasons. Also, it's missing the irony that kind of hooked me on the concept, ie. he can't touch the love of his life or she'll be dead aRead more

    I think you’ve nailed the engine of the show.

    But seeing it written down like that, it’s hard to imagine how that story is going to play out over multiple episodes/seasons.

    Also, it’s missing the irony that kind of hooked me on the concept, ie. he can’t touch the love of his life or she’ll be dead again. They’re reunited, but can never physically express their love. I wonder if there is some way of including that in the logline, or whether, with everything else going on, it’ll just end up feeling like a hat-on-a-hat.

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  3. Posted: June 28, 2020In: TVPOD

    When corporate threatens their branch with downsizing, a clueless office manager protects his quirky staff from the news by operating as though nothing has changed.

    Nicholas Andrew Halls Samurai
    Replied to answer on June 28, 2020 at 12:45 pm
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    He does only keep it a secret for a couple of episodes.

    He does only keep it a secret for a couple of episodes.

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