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When a troubled young man on community service discovers that a teacher isn't all she seems to be, he needs to stop her malicious plans before she gets a hold on the man he loves.
This is super vague ... In what specific way is he troubled? What has lead to his community service - and if it's not relevant, don't include that he's doing community service. What sort of teacher? What does he discover about the teacher? What are the teacher's plans? Why does your protagonist do iRead more
This is super vague …
In what specific way is he troubled?
What has lead to his community service – and if it’s not relevant, don’t include that he’s doing community service.
What sort of teacher? What does he discover about the teacher?
What are the teacher’s plans?
Why does your protagonist do in response?
All I know right now is that a guy on community service finds something out that could put his lover in danger. There’s the barest bones of a concept there and a statement of the stakes, but not much else to go on.
See lessWhen a troubled young man on community service discovers that a teacher isn't all she seems to be, he needs to stop her malicious plans before she gets a hold on the man he loves.
This is super vague ... In what specific way is he troubled? What has lead to his community service - and if it's not relevant, don't include that he's doing community service. What sort of teacher? What does he discover about the teacher? What are the teacher's plans? Why does your protagonist do iRead more
This is super vague …
In what specific way is he troubled?
What has lead to his community service – and if it’s not relevant, don’t include that he’s doing community service.
What sort of teacher? What does he discover about the teacher?
What are the teacher’s plans?
Why does your protagonist do in response?
All I know right now is that a guy on community service finds something out that could put his lover in danger. There’s the barest bones of a concept there and a statement of the stakes, but not much else to go on.
See lessWhen a narcissistic doctor begins to get stalked by a revengeful, criminal and psychotic patient who is dying because of a medical mistake she made when treating his disease, she must protect herself and her family.
How is your call to adventure that the character "begins to get stalked" ... it would surely be the moment she realised she was being stalked, and what specifically happens that allows this realisation?
How is your call to adventure that the character “begins to get stalked” … it would surely be the moment she realised she was being stalked, and what specifically happens that allows this realisation?
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