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When a narcissistic doctor begins to get stalked by a revengeful, criminal and psychotic patient who is dying because of a medical mistake she made when treating his disease, she must protect herself and her family.
How is your call to adventure that the character "begins to get stalked" ... it would surely be the moment she realised she was being stalked, and what specifically happens that allows this realisation?
How is your call to adventure that the character “begins to get stalked” … it would surely be the moment she realised she was being stalked, and what specifically happens that allows this realisation?
See lessAfter waking from a coma, a heterosexual young woman begins to believe that the universe is plotting to put her in the arms of the female EMT that saved her life, and away from her male fiancee.
Ugh. "young woman" ... one of my biggest pet peeves. SURELY there are better ways to describe her than her age and gender?!? Even in a story like this, when gender plays a role in the plot, it's clearly defined when you use the word "her" three times before the end of the logline, and doesn't need tRead more
Ugh. “young woman” … one of my biggest pet peeves. SURELY there are better ways to describe her than her age and gender?!? Even in a story like this, when gender plays a role in the plot, it’s clearly defined when you use the word “her” three times before the end of the logline, and doesn’t need to be used as her single defining function in your film’s world as well. Do you mean young like inexperienced? Like naive? Like wide eyed?
Agree that “believing” is not a compelling action to watch. What specifically does she do when she starts to realise this plot? How does she realise the plot? Does she react to it in anyway? I find it hard to visualise what your film looks like.
See lessAfter waking from a coma, a heterosexual young woman begins to believe that the universe is plotting to put her in the arms of the female EMT that saved her life, and away from her male fiancee.
Ugh. "young woman" ... one of my biggest pet peeves. SURELY there are better ways to describe her than her age and gender?!? Even in a story like this, when gender plays a role in the plot, it's clearly defined when you use the word "her" three times before the end of the logline, and doesn't need tRead more
Ugh. “young woman” … one of my biggest pet peeves. SURELY there are better ways to describe her than her age and gender?!? Even in a story like this, when gender plays a role in the plot, it’s clearly defined when you use the word “her” three times before the end of the logline, and doesn’t need to be used as her single defining function in your film’s world as well. Do you mean young like inexperienced? Like naive? Like wide eyed?
Agree that “believing” is not a compelling action to watch. What specifically does she do when she starts to realise this plot? How does she realise the plot? Does she react to it in anyway? I find it hard to visualise what your film looks like.
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