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After a womanising snowboarder tricks a vengeful witch into sleeping with him by making outlandish promises, she curses him and the only cure is to fulfill every one of his deceptive vows.
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Thanks for the feedback bud. Couple of quick questions. Don't you feel that, if I remove the section about his MAKING the outlandish promises, that "the only cure is for him to fulfill all promises" becomes a non-sequitor? Like, what promises would he need to fulfill? Ever promise ever? Just ones maRead more
Thanks for the feedback bud. Couple of quick questions.
Don’t you feel that, if I remove the section about his MAKING the outlandish promises, that “the only cure is for him to fulfill all promises” becomes a non-sequitor? Like, what promises would he need to fulfill? Ever promise ever? Just ones made by him?
As for “consumes his whole body” – we want to draw on the idea of “the monster within” – so think something like Wikus in District 9, Brundle in The Fly, Edgar in Men In Black, Grant in Slither … perhaps there’s a better way to communicate that now that you have some reference points? Like, perhaps I could say “decays his body”?
See lessAfter a womanising snowboarder tricks a vengeful witch into sleeping with him by making outlandish promises, she curses him and the only cure is to fulfill every one of his deceptive vows.
Thanks for the feedback bud. Couple of quick questions. Don't you feel that, if I remove the section about his MAKING the outlandish promises, that "the only cure is for him to fulfill all promises" becomes a non-sequitor? Like, what promises would he need to fulfill? Ever promise ever? Just ones maRead more
Thanks for the feedback bud. Couple of quick questions.
Don’t you feel that, if I remove the section about his MAKING the outlandish promises, that “the only cure is for him to fulfill all promises” becomes a non-sequitor? Like, what promises would he need to fulfill? Ever promise ever? Just ones made by him?
As for “consumes his whole body” – we want to draw on the idea of “the monster within” – so think something like Wikus in District 9, Brundle in The Fly, Edgar in Men In Black, Grant in Slither … perhaps there’s a better way to communicate that now that you have some reference points? Like, perhaps I could say “decays his body”?
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