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When a delusional shut-in discovers that his favorite webcam model has been kidnapped, he must utilize his detective skills to locate her before she becomes another victim of a rampant madman.
"When a deluded shut-in's favourite wedcam model is kidnapped, he takes it upon himself to rescue her from ... " How does he know it's a rampant madman who has her? Or is he just guessing? "... a notorious serial killer." The stakes are a LITTLE unclear - I went with a notorious killer, because he cRead more
“When a deluded shut-in’s favourite wedcam model is kidnapped, he takes it upon himself to rescue her from … ”
How does he know it’s a rampant madman who has her? Or is he just guessing?
“… a notorious serial killer.”
The stakes are a LITTLE unclear – I went with a notorious killer, because he could have heard this on the news, and then the implication is that her life is on the line – but I presume he equates his infatuation with her as love, and that if he rescues her she’ll be smitten with him as well?
I think the idea has legs, just want this logline to be more streamlined, and possibly to have those questions clearer in the logline.
See lessAfter a former star witness is kidnapped by an escaped (or exonerated) killer she must find a way to stop him as he hunts down the jury members who convicted him.
Why has the witness been kidnapped and kept alive while the killer goes around and murders the jury who convicted him? Why does he keep her alive, or bring her along at all?
Why has the witness been kidnapped and kept alive while the killer goes around and murders the jury who convicted him? Why does he keep her alive, or bring her along at all?
See lessA boy’s confusing existence is spent with a group of his closest friends. Dying to understand his journey, he realizes where it started.
Not a logline. Not even really a concept. This is what I know about your film: Your main character is a boy. He has some friends. That's it. What is his goal? What are the stakes? Who is trying to stop him? What is the event that kicks it all off? Is "boy" the most descriptive you can get about yourRead more
Not a logline. Not even really a concept. This is what I know about your film:
Your main character is a boy.
He has some friends.
That’s it. What is his goal? What are the stakes? Who is trying to stop him? What is the event that kicks it all off? Is “boy” the most descriptive you can get about your character? What’s his flaw?
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