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A “guinea pig” A US Infantry division, formed immediately after Pearl Harbor and populated with middle-aged draftees, becomes the most respected, effective and feared unit in the Pacific Theater, earning the nickname “The Old Bastards”.
Gotcha! So like a miniseries like Band of Brothers or The Pacific? That sounds like I really cool idea! Even for a series or a miniseries though, it still needs to hint at the conflict. Try tweaking it slightly. For example: Dismissed as too old to fight, a guinea pig division of middle-aged drafteeRead more
Gotcha! So like a miniseries like Band of Brothers or The Pacific? That sounds like I really cool idea!
Even for a series or a miniseries though, it still needs to hint at the conflict. Try tweaking it slightly. For example:
Dismissed as too old to fight, a guinea pig division of middle-aged draftees endures brutal training and five grueling island campaigns, transforming into the feared and respected “Old Bastards” of the Pacific Theater.
See lessA “guinea pig” A US Infantry division, formed immediately after Pearl Harbor and populated with middle-aged draftees, becomes the most respected, effective and feared unit in the Pacific Theater, earning the nickname “The Old Bastards”.
It’s got potential, but (and I’m assuming that this is meant to be a feature film), it needs to get more specific. Take the film The Ministry of Ungentlemanly Warfare as an example. It’s inspired by the true story of how Winston Churchill recruits a small group of well trained, albeit unorthodox solRead more
It’s got potential, but (and I’m assuming that this is meant to be a feature film), it needs to get more specific. Take the film The Ministry of Ungentlemanly Warfare as an example.
It’s inspired by the true story of how Winston Churchill recruits a small group of well trained, albeit unorthodox soldiers who essentially serve as the precursor to modern day special forces.
But, the film narrows its focus by honing in on a key mission to infiltrate a neutral Spanish-controlled island and steal Axis ships from an international harbor while avoiding international fallout. You need to do the same.
So in your logline, focus on a key mission that earned this group the name “The Old Bastards”. Your logline should focus on the mission’s main objective as well as the insurmountable odds that the team is up against and has to overcome. As it’s currently written, the stakes are nonexistent.
Overall though, it does sound like a great film! 🙂
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Tired of working on soulless industrial projects, a frustrated architect decides to undertake ________ project, but everything hits the fan when he encounters ________ obstacle.
Tired of working on soulless industrial projects, a frustrated architect decides to undertake ________ project, but everything hits the fan when he encounters ________ obstacle.
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