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After an attempt on his father’s life, a by-the-book Marine captain must kill his father’s rivals and become head of his own crime family to protect those he loves.
I'm head-slapping myself here! I just realised these are 'Examples'. I kept? wondering why you were all talking about The Godfather and not the writer's logline. The terrain? has changed since I last visited these shores. As you were soldiers...
I’m head-slapping myself here!
I just realised these are ‘Examples’. I kept? wondering why you were all talking about The Godfather and not the writer’s logline.
The terrain? has changed since I last visited these shores.
As you were soldiers…
See lessAfter an attempt on his father’s life, a by-the-book Marine captain must kill his father’s rivals and become head of his own crime family to protect those he loves.
Reading through all the comments I have a question. Because this story mirrors The Godfather in so many ways, as noted by the comments,? have you thought about flipping the plot? in such a way that it elevates the story towards a more high concept /original idea? Perhaps by doing so we can move awayRead more
Reading through all the comments I have a question. Because this story mirrors The Godfather in so many ways, as noted by the comments,? have you thought about flipping the plot? in such a way that it elevates the story towards a more high concept /original idea?
Perhaps by doing so we can move away from comparisons to The Godfather and concentrate on why this story is different and? important for you to write.
I look forward to seeing more from you.
See lessWhen her reclusive father dies without a will, his washed-up rodeo queen daughter must gather her estranged siblings in order to settle his estate.
Why is gathering her estranged siblings together so important? A simple idea must still be intriguing. Perhaps your plot can takes an unexpected? left turn that we are not expecting? If so, add this to your logline. Thank you for submitting and good luck.
Why is gathering her estranged siblings together so important?
A simple idea must still be intriguing. Perhaps your plot can takes an unexpected? left turn that we are not expecting? If so, add this to your logline.
Thank you for submitting and good luck.
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