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The scorned stepchild of a serial killer is pushed to the limit when his stepfather turns on the family and neighbors for what he perceives as their roles in the death of his biological son.
The logline needs to be clearer. I had to read it a few times. For example, is the stepchild the only one that knows he is a serial killer? Why would the stepfather think they are responsible? I usually cross out words to help revise my logline. Make sure you have a protagonist, inciting incident, tRead more
The logline needs to be clearer. I had to read it a few times. For example, is the stepchild the only one that knows he is a serial killer? Why would the stepfather think they are responsible?
I usually cross out words to help revise my logline. Make sure you have a protagonist, inciting incident, the protagonist goal, and the central conflict.
Then I revise from there to get a clearer starting point. It?s not perfect but it will help rethink your idea and Logline.
A scorned child must stop his vengeful stepfather from killing his family.
I hope this helps.
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I agree. It?s missing a hurdle or at at stakes to push the protagonist and the story forward.This helps me brainstorm more when doing my loglines. 1. Identify the protagonist 2. Inciting incident. What blows the characters life apart? 3. Protagonist goal. 4. Central conflict. What obstacles that getRead more
I agree. It?s missing a hurdle or at at stakes to push the protagonist and the story forward.This helps me brainstorm more when doing my loglines.
See less1. Identify the protagonist
2. Inciting incident. What blows the characters life apart?
3. Protagonist goal.
4. Central conflict. What obstacles that get in the way of your character. A antagonist or antagonistic forces.