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  1. Posted: March 14, 2020In: Examples, SciFi

    In a future where winners are conceived using genetic engineering, a born loser buys the identity of a winner on the black market so he can fulfill his lifelong dream of space travel.

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    Added an answer on March 14, 2020 at 12:32 pm

    I was able to guess this one. I forgot the space travel plot though. There was enough in the logline to make it easily identifiable. You make it seem effortless. Lots of practice I guess.

    I was able to guess this one. I forgot the space travel plot though. There was enough in the logline to make it easily identifiable. You make it seem effortless. Lots of practice I guess.

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  2. Posted: March 13, 2020In: Fantasy

    In a future where the wealthy live above the smog in floating cities, a group of scavengers ? led by a buoyant teen ? make the seemingly impossible ascent from the barren earth below in search of essential supplies for their people.

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    Added an answer on March 13, 2020 at 8:35 pm

    So poor people are looking for supplies by climbing or floating to where the rich are? What supplies? Why do they need the supplies? Why can't they scavenge on the surface? What is the urgency? Is there a specific item they can only get by ascending? Is it imperative that they get that item and why?

    So poor people are looking for supplies by climbing or floating to where the rich are? What supplies? Why do they need the supplies? Why can’t they scavenge on the surface? What is the urgency? Is there a specific item they can only get by ascending? Is it imperative that they get that item and why?

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  3. Posted: March 13, 2020In: Western

    When the town bully humiliates him, a mild-mannered cowboy sets out to reclaim his dignity, only to accidentally kill the man, and set off his violent outlaw family.

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    Added an answer on March 13, 2020 at 8:08 pm

    The one you posted is the best out of the three. Its a good concept IMO but I'm no expert. Seems like it could be a comedy. Maybe he 'accidentally' kills the outlaws out for vengeance as well. What is the cowboy going to do about his new predicament? Maybe the outlaw family already runs the town andRead more

    The one you posted is the best out of the three. Its a good concept IMO but I’m no expert. Seems like it could be a comedy. Maybe he ‘accidentally’ kills the outlaws out for vengeance as well.

    What is the cowboy going to do about his new predicament?
    Maybe the outlaw family already runs the town and he wants to free the people from oppression.

    Otherwise he could skip town, problem solved. Why does he stay to fight?

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