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  1. Posted: March 4, 2020In: Student Loglines

    When in a village destroyed by war something in the shadows begins to haunt and torment him, a dreamy child must fight to survive and find some happiness along the way.

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    Added an answer on March 13, 2020 at 7:09 pm

    If it's for an animated short I can see where you are going. What is the child doing to find happiness? Is he looking for a place without war? Maybe something like this... A dreamy child seeks refuge after his village is destroyed and manages a positive attitude even though the entire countryside isRead more

    If it’s for an animated short I can see where you are going. What is the child doing to find happiness? Is he looking for a place without war? Maybe something like this…

    A dreamy child seeks refuge after his village is destroyed and manages a positive attitude even though the entire countryside is a violent battlefield.

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  2. Posted: March 23, 2017In: Thriller

    BLOODLUST The dormant past life as an 8th Century Norse Berserker is sparked in a modern day peace loving Hindu man after he witnesses his loved ones murdered in a robbery. Now he must fight to control the growing bloodlust before it destroys him.

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    Added an answer on March 13, 2020 at 5:58 pm

    Interesting. I like the contrasts of past lifes. Im wondering if the berzerker must have atoned for his violence in order to be reincarnated as a Hindu. I also wonder How is the bloodlust destroying him. Does he want to kill random people? Is he on a quest for vengeance and taking the violence too fRead more

    Interesting. I like the contrasts of past lifes. Im wondering if the berzerker must have atoned for his violence in order to be reincarnated as a Hindu.
    I also wonder How is the bloodlust destroying him. Does he want to kill random people? Is he on a quest for vengeance and taking the violence too far? Who is judging him? Is he risking the Vikings identity taking over completely? What are the stakes? Lots of questions. I’m new to this so maybe my advice isn’t that great but my main take is that ‘bloodlust threatens to destroy him is a bit vague.

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  3. Posted: March 3, 2020In: Drama

    A public defender doubles as a private dominatrix to support her family, but when a lonely, corrupt judge finds out she must sexually and emotionally satisfy a man with the power to ruin her life.

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    Added an answer on March 12, 2020 at 1:01 pm

    Fantastic premise. So much potential but if she is a dominatrix why would she be averse to dominating the judge?

    Fantastic premise. So much potential but if she is a dominatrix why would she be averse to dominating the judge?

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