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While appraising old and rare books at a restored colonial plantation, a book collector stumbles across a series of diaries that chronicle an alien visitation in 1781.
totally with you, like the narrator scenes in rocky horror picture show, he is an interesting and entertaining part of the film, but would not be written into the logline
totally with you, like the narrator scenes in rocky horror picture show, he is an interesting and entertaining part of the film, but would not be written into the logline
See lessAn epidemic of mutant creatures attack unsuspecting victims while in the bathroom causing the mayor to call for federal help to save the city.
Sounds interesting but I think it needs to clearly state who the protagonist is. Is it the mayor, one of the victims, or a hero that comes to save the city?
Sounds interesting but I think it needs to clearly state who the protagonist is. Is it the mayor, one of the victims, or a hero that comes to save the city?
See lessEveryone has secrets. What extent will the people of Splendid Harbor, NH go to keep their secrets from becoming known? Worlds will be rocked and someone will die as each unveiled secret brings up darker secrets from a prominent family's past …
Although this creates mystery and some sense of wanting to know what the secrets are, I feel that you need to give more information to grab our attention. For example, all I really know from this logline is that the story is set in Splendid Harbour and 'some rich people' have 'some secrets', but asRead more
Although this creates mystery and some sense of wanting to know what the secrets are, I feel that you need to give more information to grab our attention.
For example, all I really know from this logline is that the story is set in Splendid Harbour and ‘some rich people’ have ‘some secrets’, but as you state in the first line ‘everyone has secrets’.
I am sure that you have a great story in your mind, full of twists and turns, but I suspect you are being overly secretive yourself for fear of revealing the twists, so much so that all you reveal is the location!
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