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The son of a scientist is called to the future to solve the world?s oxygen crisis and save the woman he loves.
I like it. "Oxygen crisis" is your hook... it had me curious about your future world...is breathable air $1.44 a cubic metre? Do they live in huge glass domes? :) I agree with Nina and CaveDude21, tell us more about the main character (strength, flaw, occupation), and what he must do to stop the criRead more
I like it. “Oxygen crisis” is your hook… it had me curious about your future world…is breathable air $1.44 a cubic metre? Do they live in huge glass domes? 🙂
I agree with Nina and CaveDude21, tell us more about the main character (strength, flaw, occupation), and what he must do to stop the crisis. And you can leave out the love part, it’s the B plot.
Also, what kind of sci-fi is it: action, drama, or comedy? At the moment, it’s not too clear. Again, letting us know what the main character must do will help with this.
My crack at it:
“When a ::describe main character:: is transported to the future to solve Earth’s oxygen/pollution crisis, he must ::do something::, before millions die.”
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The choir plot alone is too weak to carry this movie, but it might work as a multi-protagonist peice with a common theme, like in the "Joy Luck Club". You could focus on three or four characters, and each character could have his/her own thirty minute story, perhaps about how they ended up joining tRead more
The choir plot alone is too weak to carry this movie, but it might work as a multi-protagonist peice with a common theme, like in the “Joy Luck Club”. You could focus on three or four characters, and each character could have his/her own thirty minute story, perhaps about how they ended up joining the choir.
Avoid vague phrases like “A disparate and desperate group of people”, “transcend their hopelessness”, and “a dignity and purpose that their ravaged lives had threatened to destroy”. Instead, be specific about who these characters are: their strengths and flaws, what they do, and their hardships.
– Patrockable, Judge
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Sorry, forgot: Patrockable, Judge
Sorry, forgot:
See lessPatrockable, Judge