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  1. Posted: January 10, 2013In: Public

    When the entire 9th grade turn into robots overnight, a brash class captain must lead them to an underwater fortress before the military destroys them.

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    Added an answer on January 12, 2013 at 12:01 am

    BOAT???? haha thanks for that insight Richiev. I didn't realize "captain" was such a poor word choice... I didn't mean sea captain but class captain i.e. the class president! In my school they were called captains so it totally missed that. He was voted class president for the wrong reasons - he hadRead more

    BOAT???? haha thanks for that insight Richiev.

    I didn’t realize “captain” was such a poor word choice… I didn’t mean sea captain but class captain i.e. the class president! In my school they were called captains so it totally missed that.

    He was voted class president for the wrong reasons – he had swagger and a cool hair cut, but when he becomes a hunted robot (along with the rest of his class), he learns what it truly means to lead.

    And yes good 2nd comment – its only one class of 9th graders. So take two is:

    When a class of 9th graders turn into robots, their brash class president must lead them to an underwater fortress before the military destroys them.

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  2. Posted: January 11, 2013In: Public

    A dorky accountant has to overcome his fear of the ocean and learn to surf in order to attend a father-son surf competition so his son can hang with the cool kids, one of whose dads just so happens to be his high school nemesis.

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    Added an answer on January 11, 2013 at 10:46 pm

    Yeah, I think acceptance is relatable enough! Here's my take: An ocean-fearing accountant must beat his high school nemesis in a father-son surf competition to earn his son's respect.

    Yeah, I think acceptance is relatable enough!

    Here’s my take:

    An ocean-fearing accountant must beat his high school nemesis in a father-son surf competition to earn his son’s respect.

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  3. Posted: January 5, 2013In: Public

    When his 7-year-old son drops the c-bomb in class, Jack, a kind hearted but foul mouthed family man, is given an ultimatum by his wife, sex or swearing.

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    Added an answer on January 6, 2013 at 4:39 pm

    Stakes too low, I'm finding it hard to care. Obviously you just stop swearing. THE END.

    Stakes too low, I’m finding it hard to care. Obviously you just stop swearing. THE END.

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