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Animal activists do a night raid on a facility only to discover human not animal unwilling test subjects. They are now trapped with a security force willing to kill them to protect the secret.
I don't think the logline is quite right, but I love the concept. I could see that being a solid low-budget creature feature. Perhaps: When environmental activists raid a chemical testing lab to free the imprisoned animals, they find something far worse locked in the cages.
I don’t think the logline is quite right, but I love the concept. I could see that being a solid low-budget creature feature.
Perhaps:
When environmental activists raid a chemical testing lab to free the imprisoned animals, they find something far worse locked in the cages.
See lessIn a tragic incident that led to the dead of parents and the loss of her eyes as a child, a blind female psychologist who is very good in using her other senses is hired by the FBI to solve crimes.
The first sentence needs to go. The incident that killed her parents (incident is too vague, if this is a killer that will show up then tell us), and that incident isn't what brought her to the FBI, it's her skills. So that's backstory, and not a part of a logline. Start with "A blind femaleRead more
The first sentence needs to go. The incident that killed her parents (incident is too vague, if this is a killer that will show up then tell us), and that incident isn’t what brought her to the FBI, it’s her skills. So that’s backstory, and not a part of a logline.
Start with “A blind female psychologist with heightened other senses, is hired to consult for the FBI in order to solve XXX cases” – fill in the specific details that make her talent useful.
I would assume this is a TV show, and it would certainly work, but I would like to know about the (preferably ironic) partner who she is forced to work with. Like we see in The Mentalist or Monk or Numbers.
See lessAfter he finds out the mysterious woman he spent the night with is his fiancee’s stepmother, a troubled playboy must navigate a weekend retreat filled with sexual tension and jealousy.
As mentioned elsewhere, knowing the genre would clarify the tone. It sounds like a comedy to me, but they could turn on him and things could get deadly if it's a thriller. I also would like some indication of the timeline as a weekend away is hardly high stakes. If this was just prior to theRead more
As mentioned elsewhere, knowing the genre would clarify the tone. It sounds like a comedy to me, but they could turn on him and things could get deadly if it’s a thriller.
I also would like some indication of the timeline as a weekend away is hardly high stakes. If this was just prior to the wedding then we would know things could explode with greater consequences, and a ticking clock that makes his redemption/arc more immediate.
Otherwise the problem is we have an unlikeable, unsympathetic character as the lead, surrounded by many other characters who we also don’t care about, on a weekend away, which we definitely don’t care about – and so no reason to watch. So it’s missing that external story element that brings them together and forces them to work out their issues. In this version they just go their own way and we wouldn’t care.
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