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You do state her goal is to achieve fame, but that seems so unrelated to the inciting incident that I didn't connect the two.
You do state her goal is to achieve fame, but that seems so unrelated to the inciting incident that I didn’t connect the two.
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From my reading of the logline, it sounds like a documentary, not a feature film, because the hero has no dramatic goal we can see her trying to achieve and the obstacles that would keep her from reaching it.
From my reading of the logline, it sounds like a documentary, not a feature film, because the hero has no dramatic goal we can see her trying to achieve and the obstacles that would keep her from reaching it.
See lessA washed up celebrity in a bitter custody battle with his scheming ex-wife, is knocked unconscious by a plane crash and awakens believing he is a super hero from one his films.
Thanks for the feedback everyone. Very helpful.
Thanks for the feedback everyone. Very helpful.
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