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Werewolf hunters discover an Alpha wants to eliminate them, and the veil?s pierced when their oblivious biochemist daughter realizes it?s her it wants.
Sounds interesting. I think you might have outlined a twist in the story rather than the logline though. You've mentioned a group of people- the hunters- and a potential target- the daughter- but I'm not getting a sense of who the hero is. I'm still learning how to do loglines myself but, using theRead more
Sounds interesting. I think you might have outlined a twist in the story rather than the logline though. You’ve mentioned a group of people- the hunters- and a potential target- the daughter- but I’m not getting a sense of who the hero is.
I’m still learning how to do loglines myself but, using the example format given on this site, maybe try structuring it a little differently, e.g.
When a team of research scientists are attacked by werewolves in the wilderness, Prof. John Doe must outwit the blood thirsty leader of the pack before they are turned into werewolves themselves.
It’s a so-so attempt at a logline but maybe it will spark something for you 🙂
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