1. Posted: June 24, 2013In:

    With an uncanny ability to literally see the souls of his clients, a gifted portrait artist finds fame, fortune, and love; but when his true love escapes his grasp, he encounters a struggle to maintain his sanity while reclaiming his lost love.

    phoenixx50

    Thank you. I truly appreciate the input. I am in the processing of putting your suggestion to use right now.

    Thank you. I truly appreciate the input. I am in the processing of putting your suggestion to use right now.

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  2. Posted: June 24, 2013In:

    In the future, the UK is completely overseen by CCTV. There are three blind spots, and in one week four men must organise three high-profile murders ? one to take place in each.

    phoenixx50

    I don't understand completely what's taking place here. What is CCTV? What are blind spots? Three high profile murders to take place in each what? blindspot? It sounds riveting, but you should make a bit clearer.

    I don’t understand completely what’s taking place here. What is CCTV? What are blind spots? Three high profile murders to take place in each what? blindspot? It sounds riveting, but you should make a bit clearer.

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  3. Posted: June 24, 2013In:

    A widower discovers he?s been left a fortune by his late wife, but simultaneously realises she has a secret past which might change his opinion of her forever. In her death, he comes to know her better than he ever did whilst they were married.

    phoenixx50

    I get the entire premise without the second sentence. I don't think you need that.

    I get the entire premise without the second sentence. I don’t think you need that.

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