1. Posted: September 10, 2013In:

    To get the girl of his dreams a timid momma?s boy must team up with the local cat burglar, but her unorthodox methods put more than his love life at risk.

    pmd

    I agree. The how/why link between cat burglar and the boy's love is unclear. Also, how would a timid momma's boy know who the cat burglar is? If he did, wouldn't everyone else know? What I DO like is it sounds like there is a solid narrative arc here to build upon.

    I agree. The how/why link between cat burglar and the boy’s love is unclear. Also, how would a timid momma’s boy know who the cat burglar is? If he did, wouldn’t everyone else know?

    What I DO like is it sounds like there is a solid narrative arc here to build upon.

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  2. Posted: September 10, 2013In:

    A brilliant Russian Cadet shortly after his graduation day is being targeted by the CIA, his respond was a personal travel to NYC to change all well-known war tactics with the help of his genius weapons.

    pmd

    I agree. Is Yuri the cadet? What is the cadet's obstacle?

    I agree. Is Yuri the cadet? What is the cadet’s obstacle?

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