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  1. Posted: January 26, 2014In: Public

    After being rejected by his Italo-American mafioso father, a mixed race lawyer decides to exact revenge by building his own criminal empire and destroying his father's.

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    Added an answer on January 28, 2014 at 1:27 pm

    I ran it through my word processor. After being rejected by his Italo-American Mafioso father, a mixed race lawyer decides to exact revenge by building his own criminal empire and destroying his father's. "Mafioso" not "mafioso".

    I ran it through my word processor.

    After being rejected by his Italo-American Mafioso father, a mixed race lawyer decides to exact revenge by building his own criminal empire and destroying his father’s.

    “Mafioso” not “mafioso”.

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  2. Posted: January 27, 2014

    Sent to evaluate the crew and staff of a new U.S. state-of-the-art nuclear submarine during its trial runs, the head of the U. S. DoD PsyOps Division discovers her vengeful ex husband has planted a computer virus to destroy her while on board. Will this deadly psychological war destroy everything?

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    Added an answer on January 28, 2014 at 11:24 am

    Episode 000 [00/00/00] 00. On board the submarine Titanic, a civilian computer technician is seen downloading something into a computer. After he is done, he prepares to leave the boat with his equipment. He is seen being checked by ship security, and then is given permission to disembark. He headsRead more

    Episode 000 [00/00/00] 00.

    On board the submarine Titanic, a civilian computer technician is seen downloading something into a computer. After he is done, he prepares to leave the boat with his equipment. He is seen being checked by ship security, and then is given permission to disembark.

    He heads towards his car, but a limo pulls up by him. The door opens up and a man tells him to get in. As he sits down, the computer technician is asked if the job is completed, to which he replies that it is.

    As he proceeds to leave the limo, the unknown man then draws a gun on the technician, kills him; and then has the body placed in his own car.

    *INTRO CREDITS*

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  3. Posted: January 27, 2014

    Sent to evaluate the crew and staff of a new U.S. state-of-the-art nuclear submarine during its trial runs, the head of the U. S. DoD PsyOps Division discovers her vengeful ex husband has planted a computer virus to destroy her while on board. Will this deadly psychological war destroy everything?

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    Added an answer on January 28, 2014 at 6:18 am

    To use Star Wars: Episode VI. Darth Vader: He will come to me? The Emperor: I have foreseen it. His compassion for you will be his undoing. He will come to you and then you will bring him before me. Darth Vader: As you wish. However, like Palpatine, her ex husband is also mistaken. He tried to use hRead more

    To use Star Wars: Episode VI.

    Darth Vader: He will come to me?

    The Emperor: I have foreseen it. His compassion for you will be his undoing. He will come to you and then you will bring him before me.

    Darth Vader: As you wish.

    However, like Palpatine, her ex husband is also mistaken. He tried to use her son to weaken her just like Harper Dearing did when he had her ex-husband released from jail. This time, she will not let her ex get away with it. It is still all psychological. However, that does not mean that she still would not be afraid of what might happen.

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