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  1. Posted: July 31, 2013In: Public

    In exchange for escaping a house haunted by a demon, a group of teenaged friends must vote to decide which one of them must stay behind to be killed.

    Richard Cosgrove
    Added an answer on July 31, 2013 at 8:43 pm

    Thanks. I intend this to be a low- or microbudget feature.

    Thanks. I intend this to be a low- or microbudget feature.

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  2. Posted: April 23, 2013In: Public

    After being severely hurt by a grenade at Hitler youth camp, a prideful and nationalistic ten-year old boy discovers that his mother is hiding a fifteen year old Jewish girl in their house.

    Richard Cosgrove
    Added an answer on July 31, 2013 at 9:58 am

    After being severely hurt by a grenade at Hitler youth camp, a prideful and nationalistic ten-year old boy discovers that his mother is hiding a fifteen year old Jewish girl in their house. This logline peaked my interest: stories about the Nazis never get old, and showing life in Nazi Germany throuRead more

    After being severely hurt by a grenade at Hitler youth camp, a prideful and nationalistic ten-year old boy discovers that his mother is hiding a fifteen year old Jewish girl in their house.

    This logline peaked my interest: stories about the Nazis never get old, and showing life in Nazi Germany through the eyes of a child ? let alone a devoted member of the Nazi Youth ? is rarely done. I’d say this is definitely marketable and could easily be made.

    However, while it has a hook, it lacks a firm idea of the story: what happens between the boy and the girl? His mother and him? Does he change for the better (helping the girl) or for the worse (giving both up to the Nazis)?

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  3. Posted: January 22, 2013In: Public

    After stealing from his father, a selfish juvenile must survive in a hostile crowd as he seeks to purchase a pair of the hottest sneakers ever.

    Richard Cosgrove
    Added an answer on July 31, 2013 at 9:37 am

    "?Jingle All The Way? with trainers," was my reaction to reading this. I could immediately picture a marketable quirky physical action-comedy with a teen lead from this logline. For me what was missing was a specific protagonist ? such as the father, who wants his money back ? and whether the teen oRead more

    “?Jingle All The Way? with trainers,” was my reaction to reading this.

    I could immediately picture a marketable quirky physical action-comedy with a teen lead from this logline.

    For me what was missing was a specific protagonist ? such as the father, who wants his money back ? and whether the teen overcomes his flaw, and becomes a better person (because this sounds like precisely that type of movie).

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