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A woman whose mother was murdered when she was a child of twelve, is now, fifteen years later, working as a detective and still pursuing her mother's killer, who, it turns out, is closer than she thinks.
Thanks for the feedback. It sounds like my story is just too complicated to be laid out in 25 or so words.
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See lessIt sounds like my story is just too complicated to be laid out in 25 or so words.
A woman whose mother was murdered when she was a child of twelve, is now, fifteen years later, working as a detective and still pursuing her mother's killer, who, it turns out, is closer than she thinks.
It is more difficult to be specific than I realized. My intention for the inciting incident was at the point where the detective suddenly realizes that the clues in her investigation of the murder today are IDENTICAL to those found at the scene of her mother's death 20 years earlier. This is the incRead more
It is more difficult to be specific than I realized.
My intention for the inciting incident was at the point where the detective suddenly realizes that the clues in her investigation of the murder today are IDENTICAL to those found at the scene of her mother’s death 20 years earlier. This is the inciting incident for her to look for the murderer of the current victim, who also murdered her mother, it raised the stakes, makes the story more unique, and it starts the story.
See lessA woman whose mother was murdered when she was a child of twelve, is now, fifteen years later, working as a detective and still pursuing her mother's killer, who, it turns out, is closer than she thinks.
Or this: When a fledgling criminologist finds clues at a murder scene strikingly similar to those when her mother was murdered 20 years earlier, she broadens her investigation to catch the double killer before he gets her too. Specific details? High stakes? Clear cause and effect relationship? One cRead more
Or this:
When a fledgling criminologist finds clues at a murder scene strikingly similar to those when her mother was murdered 20 years earlier, she broadens her investigation to catch the double killer before he gets her too.
Specific details?
See lessHigh stakes?
Clear cause and effect relationship?
One compelling goal?