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A woman whose mother was murdered when she was a child of twelve, is now, fifteen years later, working as a detective and still pursuing her mother's killer, who, it turns out, is closer than she thinks.
How about this then? A fledgling criminologist finds unique clues at a murder scene strikingly similar to those when her mother was murdered 20 years earlier, causing her to pursue and catch the double killer The similarity is the inciting incident. The problem for me is that the actual story line..Read more
How about this then?
A fledgling criminologist finds unique clues at a murder scene strikingly similar to those when her mother was murdered 20 years earlier, causing her to pursue and catch the double killer
The similarity is the inciting incident. The problem for me is that the actual story line… pursuit and capture….. is standard stuff for a pursuit genre thriller. i.e. boring and predictable.
My tendency is to want to end with a hook to make it more interesting.
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This is my goal exactly: To focus attention on the situation, to raise awareness, and to do it via the struggling of a few specific characters.
This is my goal exactly: To focus attention on the situation, to raise awareness, and to do it via the struggling of a few specific characters.
See lessIn a dystopian world, a geeky geneticist invents a super-seed to avert global starvation and finds himself pursued by dark corporate profiteers.
These are ALL good comments (and I agree). Thanks for the enlightened feedback!
These are ALL good comments (and I agree). Thanks for the enlightened feedback!
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