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An opportunistic internship becomes a battle of wits between? an ambitious young man and a manipulative venture capitalist when the former learns that he’s being used as an accessory to the latter’s white collar crimes.
Good start.Taking Richiev's logline one step further, clarify the "wits" and "turn the tables." Be specific with at least one battle or otherwise paint more of a mental picture.Is "opportunistic"? a contradiction? Sounds like he's there waiting to exploit something and the rest of the logline says hRead more
Good start.
Taking Richiev’s logline one step further, clarify the “wits” and “turn the tables.” Be specific with at least one battle or otherwise paint more of a mental picture.
Is “opportunistic”? a contradiction? Sounds like he’s there waiting to exploit something and the rest of the logline says he reacts to something. Describe him once, not in two separate places. “Ambitious” is assumed working in a VC company. Describe him in a way that is the start of his arc, with a flaw or issue.
See lessAfter discovering his travelling companion has a bag of cash a man starts a conversation hoping to blackmail him. When that fails he threatens violence that escalates into murder.
What is the status of this idea, in development or completed script? Different comments for each and I personally like to give my time to those being developed.
What is the status of this idea, in development or completed script? Different comments for each and I personally like to give my time to those being developed.
See lessAfter discovering his travelling companion has a bag of cash a man starts a conversation hoping to blackmail him. When that fails he threatens violence that escalates into murder.
Describe the men. Add the details from the discussion. If the blackmailer is angry about the past, why doesn't he start with murder? How exactly does he blackmail the other? >> both characters have reasons to hate them and reasons to like them. This should be apparent in the logline. What's thRead more
Describe the men. Add the details from the discussion.
If the blackmailer is angry about the past, why doesn’t he start with murder? How exactly does he blackmail the other?
>> both characters have reasons to hate them and reasons to like them.
This should be apparent in the logline.
What’s the purpose of this being 1980?
Something like, “After their car breaks down on the way to delivering a bag of cash to their union bosses, two family men- one…”
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