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In the 1960?s, when her Greek village is devastated by drought, a teenage girl?s parents force her to migrate to Sydney Australia to marry a stranger and bring them prosperity but finds both racism and friendship, opportunities and mistreatment.
No argument there. The point is that it's possible to have too much going on in a story and it's worthwhile for the writer to consider the theme or else how all these work together and get enough time: forced marriage, supporting her parents, racism, and fish-out-of-water.
No argument there. The point is that it’s possible to have too much going on in a story and it’s worthwhile for the writer to consider the theme or else how all these work together and get enough time: forced marriage, supporting her parents, racism, and fish-out-of-water.
See lessSeries logline:?Set across the NYC Blackout of ?77, a reformed ex-con temporarily returns to his old life of drug dealing to pay for his mother?s hospital bill, but soon learns the game has changed and the players, old and new, are more ruthless than before.
With all the talk of Breaking Bad and other long series, last thing I thought of was limited!
With all the talk of Breaking Bad and other long series, last thing I thought of was limited!
See lessAn angel from heaven comes down on earth to be with a depressed young man until the time that finally meets his soulmate in fulfillment of his deceased mother?s prayer.
Good parts to build on. Agree with most of the other comments.Assuming the angel has no other conflict than in helping the man, the next attempt should clarify how the angel helps and if the angel reveals itself to the man or acts incognito.? Why does the man need help? If he's depressed because ofRead more
Good parts to build on. Agree with most of the other comments.
Assuming the angel has no other conflict than in helping the man, the next attempt should clarify how the angel helps and if the angel reveals itself to the man or acts incognito.? Why does the man need help? If he’s depressed because of his mother, then it’s assumed and should be? replaced by a better description and his flaw or issue.? Be specific to paint? the mental picture and convey the? tone…different details make this a drama or comedy (within the fantasy).
Even if the angel is the protag, it seems doable for it to not have any stakes other than the man’s soulmate. If the man is not the protag, he can still have the arc.
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