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When an orphaned dropout joins an off-grid commune to evade a hometown scandal, but secretly returns to claim an inheritance, he must fight off reporters and protestors who follow him and destroy his commune, which he must rebuild with his windfall.
Yes, rebuilding the commune is the story, and rest is the back story, but I am still having trouble making it interesting and inserting irony.
Yes, rebuilding the commune is the story, and rest is the back story, but I am still having trouble making it interesting and inserting irony.
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This is the problem with squeezing too much info. He runs away because he was named a key suspect but was later proved innocent, after he left, but his adopted grandparents didn't survive so he's orphaned. He can't and won't return and is now focused on getting his GED so he can get on with his lifeRead more
This is the problem with squeezing too much info. He runs away because he was named a key suspect but was later proved innocent, after he left, but his adopted grandparents didn’t survive so he’s orphaned. He can’t and won’t return and is now focused on getting his GED so he can get on with his life and go to college.
See lessA young Thomas Edison must win the top invention prize at the Worlds Fair to prove to his dream girl and her disapproving father that he is worthy before she marries a wealthy suitor.
I've done a lot of historical work on world's fairs and teach this topic at a university. There are so many things one could do with this. The one thing that comes to mind is that beyond the situation you set up, you could also use the particular genre of this global fair to your advantage. For examRead more
I’ve done a lot of historical work on world’s fairs and teach this topic at a university. There are so many things one could do with this. The one thing that comes to mind is that beyond the situation you set up, you could also use the particular genre of this global fair to your advantage. For example, is there anything about the fact that many countries are present that you can incorporate? Can there be a reference to something that happened at a previous fair somewhere else?
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